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A launch email people actually opened

Northfold

46% opens

On the launch send, against 29% the month before.

NorthfoldDraft 3 · 1 edit
HeadlineRewritten
Introducing Smart Reminders: automated payment follow-ups
Get paid before your coffee goes cold
Subhead
Three invoices went out last night. Two are already paid.
Button
See who’s paid
Next section
Then the three reminders it sends, in plain words, with the times they go out.
NorthfoldDraft 3 · 1 edit
HeadlineRewritten
Introducing Smart Reminders: automated payment follow-ups
Get paid before your coffee goes cold
Subhead
Three invoices went out last night. Two are already paid.
Button
See who’s paid
Next section
Then the three reminders it sends, in plain words, with the times they go out.
NorthfoldDraft 3 · 1 edit
HeadlineRewritten
Introducing Smart Reminders: automated payment follow-ups
Get paid before your coffee goes cold
Subhead
Three invoices went out last night. Two are already paid.
Button
See who’s paid
Next section
Then the three reminders it sends, in plain words, with the times they go out.

The finished piece.

The brief

Northfold was launching automatic payment reminders. The announcement email they had drafted read like release notes, and their open rates had been sliding for months.

They needed one email that small-business owners would open on a busy morning and understand in ten seconds.

What I wrote

  • Subject line and preview text

  • A three-sentence body with one clear button

  • Two follow-up emails for people who didn’t click

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Our open rate jumped the day we sent it, and the replies were people saying thanks.

DK

Devika Kapoor

Head of Growth, Northfold

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