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Product page

A product page for a $34 balm

Saltmarsh

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Over the first month on the new page.

SaltmarshDraft 2 · 1 edit
HeadlineRewritten
Daily Balm is a nourishing botanical formula suitable for all skin types.
For skin that’s had a long week.
Subhead
Oat, sea buckthorn and nothing you’d need a chemist to explain.
Button
Add to bag
Next section
Three short reasons to buy, then the full ingredient list for the people who read every word.
SaltmarshDraft 2 · 1 edit
HeadlineRewritten
Daily Balm is a nourishing botanical formula suitable for all skin types.
For skin that’s had a long week.
Subhead
Oat, sea buckthorn and nothing you’d need a chemist to explain.
Button
Add to bag
Next section
Three short reasons to buy, then the full ingredient list for the people who read every word.
SaltmarshDraft 2 · 1 edit
HeadlineRewritten
Daily Balm is a nourishing botanical formula suitable for all skin types.
For skin that’s had a long week.
Subhead
Oat, sea buckthorn and nothing you’d need a chemist to explain.
Button
Add to bag
Next section
Three short reasons to buy, then the full ingredient list for the people who read every word.

The finished piece.

The brief

Saltmarsh makes one balm, very well. The product page listed ingredients and benefits in the same flat voice as every other skincare shop.

Ines wanted the page to sound like the shop: small, warm and a bit funny.

What I wrote

  • Product name line and headline

  • A two-sentence description

  • Three reasons to buy, kept to one line each

  • Shipping and refill notes

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It finally sounds like the way our customers talk about it.

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Ines Salgado

Founder, Saltmarsh

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