All work

Bike shop

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Ad

A spring ad for commuter bikes

Tallow Cycles

3.4% click-through

On the spring campaign.

Tallow CyclesDraft 2 · 1 edit
HeadlineRewritten
Discover our range of premium e-bikes
Commute like it’s Saturday.
Subhead
Electric bikes, fitted in-store and ridden home the same day.
Button
Book a test ride
Tallow CyclesDraft 2 · 1 edit
HeadlineRewritten
Discover our range of premium e-bikes
Commute like it’s Saturday.
Subhead
Electric bikes, fitted in-store and ridden home the same day.
Button
Book a test ride
Tallow CyclesDraft 2 · 1 edit
HeadlineRewritten
Discover our range of premium e-bikes
Commute like it’s Saturday.
Subhead
Electric bikes, fitted in-store and ridden home the same day.
Button
Book a test ride

The finished piece.

The brief

Tallow Cycles wanted more test rides from people who drive to work.

The ad had to work as a square image with the sound off.

Their old ads listed motors and battery range. The people they wanted were tired of traffic, not shopping for parts.

What I wrote

  • Three headline options for testing

  • The line under the image

  • The booking button

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Best-performing ad we’ve run, and the shortest.

SL

Sam Lowe

Owner, Tallow Cycles

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